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    Default Abigail and Leon

    Abigail Anderson
    Star of the day
    Caught a boy’s attention
    And turned away

    Laughing as she ran
    Trying to catch a star
    Trading love for fame
    And for a fancy car

    Verse Two:
    Leon John Michaelis
    Just a guy on the street
    Met a girl who thought
    That he was under her feet

    Didn’t mind a bit bit
    Cause he was having fun
    Knew that someday she would
    See that he was the one

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    Interesting verses. I feel it needs a hook though.

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    Default Sugarpop Tease

    Quote Originally Posted by BackInBlack View Post
    Interesting verses. I feel it needs a hook though.
    Filled in the hook and a new chorus and renamed the song Sugarpop Tease


    Verse One:
    Abigail Anderson
    Star of the day
    Caught a boy’s attention
    And turned away

    Laughing as she ran
    Trying to catch a star
    Trading love for fame
    And for a fancy car

    Verse Two:
    Leon John Michaelis
    Just a guy on the street
    Met a girl who thought
    That he was under her feet

    Didn’t mind a bit bit
    Cause he was having fun
    Knew that someday she would
    See that he was the one

    Chorus:
    And he said

    “Hot shot! Superstar!
    Show off supreme!
    Nightshadow, daytripper
    Afternoon dream.”

    “Come to me. Run from me
    Just as you please
    Give a little take a lot
    Sugarpop tease.”

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