All That's Left

Tell me what it takes
There is no limit
Anything, everything
Let's roll with it
You're the first woman
I've ever loved
Except for my mother
And she's up above

You're All That's Left
All the others are gone
You cover the board
This will go on
All That's Left
You're the one for me
I've searched for you
Almost constantly

Tell me what you need
What do you expect
You've got my devotion
All my respect
You're the last woman
I'll ever love
I'll kill for you, baby
If push comes to shove

You're All That's Left
All the others are gone
You cover the board
This will go on
All That's Left
You're the one for me
I've searched for you
Almost constantly

You got it all, baby
You got it all
And some I never
Even knew about

You're All That's Left
All the others are gone
You cover the board
This will go on
All That's Left
You're the one for me
I've searched for you
Almost constantly

jimcolyer.com

I really enjoyed the first six lines of the lyrics. The last two lines of the second verse "I'll kill for you, baby/If push comes to shove" is cheesy. Find a more appropriate way of revealing just how deep love can be. Grade: Verse (B-); Bridge (B-); Chorus (B-)

Originally Posted by pq92k

I really enjoyed the first six lines of the lyrics. The last two lines of the second verse "I'll kill for you, baby/If push comes to shove" is cheesy. Find a more appropriate way of revealing just how deep love can be. Grade: Verse (B-); Bridge (B-); Chorus (B-)

I disagree. I think those lines flow just fine with the rest of the verse. Also, pq92k, I would advise against giving "letter grades" on someone's thread, unless they ask for it. Maybe Jim doesn't have a problem with it; nevertheless, make sure you keep your feedback strictly constructive and positive!