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  1. Matt6660 said:

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    I've fallen in the bottom of every bottle
    Every second it takes
    Every minute I break
    Feels like I'm slowly losing you

    I've taken all that I can handle
    What the **** am I doing here
    What the **** an I doing wrong
    I don't deserve to have
    I don't deserve to have you.

    I've fallen in the bottom of every bottle
    Every second it takes
    Every minute I break
    Feels like I'm slowly losing you

    I look up to light
    And all I see is surrounded by danrkess
    It isn't you it isn't me
    Falling apart just to see you
    For one last time

    I've fallen in the bottom of every bottle
    Every second it takes
    Every minute I break
    Feels like I'm slowly losing you

    I'm losing you, losing me
    Tonight will be the last
    I'm losing you, losing me
    Tonight we'll be the last
    In losing you, losing me
    Tonight will be the last time I see you face

    I've fallen in the bottom of every bottle
    Every second it takes
    Every minute I break
    Feels like I'm slowly losing you
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    I really dig the chorus. Good stuff. The rest feels a bit cliche maybe? I dunno, maybe just a little vague.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    Thank you! The rest is the feeling of you losing someone, something,or maybe yourself and realizing it's too late. Slowly falling away.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    I love the idea of it. And I understand the concept. Hmm...I'm not sure how to explain it haha.
    For instance,
    "I look up to light
    And all I see is surrounded by darkness"
    doesn't exactly make sense. Maybe like "I look up to find light" paints a less confusing picture?
    Also, are you trying to say that by losing the someone/something that you are losing yourself simultaneously?
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  5. Matt6660 said:

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    That would be great. I just add alittle mystery to the lyrics to draw in anyone.
    To the losing someone something or yourself. Yesi t is just what the reader wants to take emotionally. It could be they are losing there self or they are losing there love. While trying to find themselves. Trying to find what's right.
    Last edited by Matt6660; 11-19-2014 at 05:52 AM.