Broken on the inside

Don't leave me here again

You told me you can't take this life anymore
But I didn't know you were already broken
Like the rain crashing down in my own face

Don't leave me here again
Don't look back on the things I said to you
I just want you to know
I am with you forever to the end

Days are crashing by
Like the thunder in the sky
I'll fight for one last time
I'll fight for one last breath

Don't leave me here again
Don't look back on the things I said to you
I just want you to know
I am with you forever to the end

I'll save you from this life
Broken down inside
I'll save you from this life
Broken down inside

Don't leave me here again
Don't look back on the things I said to you
I just want you to know
I am with you forever to the end

I am with you forever
Till the end

such a sincere pledge,Matt and sure, a good one too! If this doesnot dig into the brain of the listener nothing will. A fine olea in straight words. TY!

Thank you I am glad you like it! I like to write to make make the reader drawn in and feel the different emotions and to take the reader on there own thoughts.