Cognition

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  1. farnum said:

    Default Cognition

    A chemical reaction, a process of evolution.
    Its always been a problem, never a solution.
    We hunt, bleed and kill for it, the myth that it can be true,
    The folly that is our white whale, the memories of you.

    The truth is it's a lie. Dopamine in your brain. Just your current fix...only delays the pain.

    Nerve endings tingle, the heart skips a beat.
    The brain tricks us to forget, we're nothing more than meat.
    My eyes are finally open, to the truth of all things.
    There is no place for euphoria, the end it always stings.

    The truth is it's a lie. Dopamine in your brain. Just your current fix...only delays the pain.

    Lies. Lies. Lies.

    The truth is it's a lie. Dopamine in your brain. Just your current fix...only delays the pain.

    Sour acid in your stomach, saline in your eyes.
    It's all just reaction, to reinforce the lies.
    Dismiss the deception, No longer feel hollow.
    The notion it's real dissipates, the memories follow.

    The truth is it's a lie. Dopamine in your brain. Just your current fix...only delays the pain.

    Lies. Lies. Lies.

    The truth is it's a lie. Dopamine in your brain. Just your current fix...only delays the pain.

    Lies. Lies. Lies.
     
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    +Technist Barrier- said:

    Default +What Me Thinks of 'Cognition'-

    +What me thinks:
    First off is that I'm impressed with your vocabulary and how you use those words.
    Secondly, I like how you use repetition.
    Also I like the few rhymes in the verses.
    Nice Title.
    Finally - Welcome to ATL! Keep posting those fine lyrics.
    Oh ya, after I finished reading I felt that it wasn't finished.
    I was hoping for another verse.
    Oh well.
    Happy new year!-
    Last edited by +Technist Barrier-; 01-10-2015 at 11:46 PM.
    +To imagine is everything, to know is nothing at all.>A.France
    Oh yeah, I forgot, and always expect the unexpected. -
     
  3. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Holy $@#& this is good stuff. Would definitely love to see you more often around here!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  4. farnum said:

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    Thank you both! I've always enjoyed writing, but this was my first attempt at song lyrics. I have another one that I will post once I clean it up a bit and a third one I just started. I've posted this on a few different site, looking for as much feedback as I can get. All have been exceedingly positive, so I guess I am doing something right. I will go over this one again and see if I can get another verse in without if feeling like it's shoehorned into it.

    Thanks again!
     
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    +Technist Barrier- said:

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    +Good job with your first!-
    +To imagine is everything, to know is nothing at all.>A.France
    Oh yeah, I forgot, and always expect the unexpected. -