Old Wound

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  1. bearheart said:

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    Old Wound
    Hear the storm rage outside my door
    Shakes my bones right to the floor
    Listen to a whisper build to a shout
    Give me strength to fight this now
    Fear the fist but stand your ground
    Soon you see the time will come
    To make it end, begin again

    Today I healed an old wound
    One I could not hide
    A fathers hate that scarred my pride
    Broken hearts & beaten lives
    I write these words to save my life

    Looked into the mirror to see my pain
    If I fight what will I gain
    Am I a better man or just the same
    A son alone without a name
    Who's the one to really blame
    Full of fire I burn my shame
    Know the path, stay the course
    No one can douse your flame

    Today I healed an old wound
    One I could not hide
    A fathers hate that scarred my pride
    Broken hearts & beaten lives
    I write these words to save my life
     
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    +Technist Barrier- said:

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    +I like it but I would prefer the ending to be 'slightly' more dramatic than just the 'chorus'.
    Correct me if I'm mistaken with my point of view.-
    +To imagine is everything, to know is nothing at all.>A.France
    Oh yeah, I forgot, and always expect the unexpected. -
     
  3. pq92k said:

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    Great line: "Full of fire I burn my shame". Grade: Verse (B+); Chorus (B)