Autumn Breeze

Autumn Breeze

My mind drifts to a better place
With nothing to fear or nothing to hide
Until I see your face & I start to shake
Your not the same man that my mother loved
She had the beauty of a dove with a heart of gold
Smile of an angel with the brightest soul
On the day she died everybody cried
Except for my father who had nothing left

Autumn breeze sweep me away
Take me back to those happy days
Where I’m reminded where my heart remains
Too bad nothing stays the same
But we have the power to change our ways

He set us aside to babysit the bottle
Pushed us around down to the bottom
God give me strength to beat this pain
Today I stand my ground
Dig in my feet & look inside
Where I know my heart will survive
Now it's time that I came alive

Autumn breeze sweep me away
Take me back to those happy days
Where I’m reminded where my heart remains
Too bad nothing stays the same
But we have the power to change our ways

+I see your structure:
Verse 1
Chorus
Verse 2
Chorus

not bad but try putting an ending at the end... unless you have something up with endings.
I actually like your lyrics as they aren't always about the love life stuff but about the struggles, problems, solutions, etc of life.-

Thank you so much for all the feedback & support. I completely agree I need to work on my linear structure. The new lyrics I'm working on I think you will be very pleased with.

+Oh come on, it's nothing really. Who doesn't like feedback?-