City Streets

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    There's so much I don't know
    There's so much I'll never be
    But that don't mean I stop living
    There's so much left to see
    I won't be bound by these boarders
    I won't be bound by the sea

    "chorus"

    But I, will get out and run
    Until I see the sun
    From every coast, you see
    I will not be bound-
    By these city streets
    These city streets


    I'll climb the highest mountains
    I'll sail across the ocean
    I'll live amongst the gardens
    I'll live by my emotions
    I won't be bound by these boarders
    I won't be bound by the sea

    "chorus"
    But I, will get out and run
    Until I see the sun
    From every coast, you see
    I will not be bound
    By these city streets
    These city streets

    Oh I will not be bound
    Oh I, will not be bound
    Oh I, will not be bound
    By these city streets
    These city streets
    Last edited by Johnb31; 04-14-2015 at 01:16 AM.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I like your determination and will to succeed.
    Jim Colyer Girl albums
     
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    Teshka said:

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    great thoughts Johnb and I know that it would sound great in song. Have you set this to music? what genre?
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Thank you, and yes I have its kind of a folkish sound
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  5. pq92k said:

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    The second verse is clichéd and the overall structure of the lyrics is too simplistic.