Circus Sinister

Thread: Circus Sinister

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  1. ElegantButler said:

    Default Circus Sinister

    Circus Sinister

    VERSE 1:
    Can you hear the music?
    Itís all around you?
    Can you hear the music
    As it surrounds you?

    The calliopeís playing as loud as it can
    With the help of the drums of the old marching band
    Itís the music that haunts you in all of your dreams
    Itís the music thatís drowning out all of your screams

    BRIDGE:
    Lovely child
    Lovely child
    Come to the show.
    Come to the show.

    Lovely child.
    Lovely child.
    Come to the show.
    Come to the show.

    CHORUS:
    Sweet little girl
    With your sweet little curls
    Wonít you come to the show?

    Sweet little girl
    With your sweet little curls
    Wonít you come to the show

    VERSE 2:
    Can you hear the music?
    Itís all around you.
    Can you hear the music
    As it surrounds you


    The calliopeís playing as loud as it can
    With the help of the drums of the old marching band
    Itís the music that drowning out all of your screams
    And forever will haunt every one of your dreams.


    BRIDGE:
    Lonely child
    Lonely child

    Come to the show
    Come to the show


    SECOND CHORUS:
    Sweet little girl
    With your sweet little curls
    Wonít you come to the show?

    Sweet little boys
    Why not put down your toys
    And come to the show

    Lonely child
    Lonely child

    Come to the show.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    If you were going for creepy......you got it.If you were going for eerie.........you got it.I could almost hear the circus organ in the background.The title lends to the vibe of the song........sinister!Good one,I hope it doesn't "just sit here",if you know what I mean.
     
  3. ElegantButler said:

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    Yeah, that is the tone. It was inspired by a creepypasta called Deadwoods Circus. I agree about the organ. I can hear it as well. A playful yet sinister two beats per measure undertone as well, like a timpani or such.
     
  4. ElegantButler said:

    Default The basic music concept

    This is just a basic concept of the music so far. I was going to use an organ but it sounded better with Celeste, Timpani, and Cowbell.

    https://youtu.be/SOI_YQ87DO8