Untitled (Dear [fill in the blank man])

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  1. ghaw2007 said:

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    Untitled (Dear [fill in the blank man])

    Verse 1
    Dear [fill in the blank man]
    I know you always want me to score an "F"
    I know you always want me to hold out my hand
    I know you always want me to be surrounded by broken dreams

    Dear mighty man
    I know you're always planning to start a war
    I know you're always creating division among people
    I know you're always profiting from chaos and misery

    Dear I-don't-mind-my-own-business man
    I know you're always getting involved into everything
    I know you always want to know what's being thought of and said
    I know you always want to have the last word

    Verse 2
    Dear egotist man
    I know you always believe in the great equalizer
    I know you always want to have it wherever you roam
    I know you always want to be protected in every way

    Dear deceptive man
    I know you're always lying
    That's why you exist
    I know you always create situations for your benefit
    I know you're always taking advantage of everything

    Verse 3
    Dear self-centered man
    I know you always get emotional when others reject you
    I know you always want to influence everything you encounter
    I know you always act as master and commander of the seas

    Dear adventurous man
    I know you always seek out to discover new things
    I know you always want to create new experiences
    I know you always make the most of life's offerings

    Bridge 1
    Is there a way to change your DNA?
    Is there a way for you to think differently?
    Is there a way to accept your natural status?
    Only you know the answers

    Bridge 2
    Is there a way to change your DNA?
    Is there a way to purify your torturous blood?
    Is there a way to reconcile with your identity?
    Only you know the answers

    Bridge 3
    Is there a way to change your DNA?
    Is there a way for you to address your complexes?
    Is there a way to re-create yourself?
    Only you know the answers

    Chorus 1
    He, she - everyone worships you
    Without thought, we bow down to your power
    Him, her - everyone wants to be like you
    Without thought, we bow down to your feet

    Chorus 2
    He, she - everyone respects you
    Without thought, we bow down to your power
    Him, her - everyone's afraid of you
    Without thought, we bow down to your feet
    You travel to every part of the universe
    You build and destroy
    As it comes naturally to you
    You appoint yourself as judge, jury, executioner

    Chorus 3
    He, she - everyone respects you
    Without thought, we bow down to your power
    Him, her - everyone's afraid of you
    Without thought, we bow down to your feet
    You eroticize many creatures and objects
    You impact the air and the soil
    You consume all things like a raging wildfire
    Your ways of life go beyond your body and soul

    Written by B. (Sunday, December 14, 2014)
    Copyright 2014
     
  2. orsen said:

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    Some excellent lines in this, ah, War and Peace of songs. Its way too long and nobody will read it all the way through so some of your best lines will not get read. Start hacking dude.
     
  3. pq92k said:

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    This is very well-written. I have read it multiple times and I love it! The questions you pose are profound and necessary. I have been reading some of your other lyrics, and you come across as being a deep and critical thinker. The best lines are "I know you always act as master and commander of the seas" and "Is there a way to purify your torturous blood?".