Would like some thoughts on this verse I'm working on

Hey guys, these are rap lyrics I'm working on from a very personal song of mine. I want it to flow and keep the listener engaged throughout, any feedback would be great. Thanks!
Ps. I'm still working on the last 6 lines to make the end of the verse memorable.

AABB
every Time I hear your Voice / i Feel an OverWhelming Hate
neVer knew that my Father could Bring me to this Place
A place of emptiness / a place I feel alone
That cold feeling has no place within my humble home

AABB
How could I help? / I had to hate you
knew I'd forgive you for your ****ups if ever I faced you
....………………/instead I'm staring in the mirror
Reflection ain't the same because perspective
Got clearer

AA
Me and my brother you took for granted, forgot about
Now you all on my line asking to talk it out?

great one .