Last laugh

Wrote in like 20 mins so not sorted yet but would love to know what people think and any improvements are welcome

Your days are the darkest
Like a winters morn
Seeming like theirs no end in sight
And it's been forever since you've seen the dawn

Feeling so breathless
Like a whale out the sea
People may be helping keep you alive
But you know it's not where youre supposed to be

There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
They may hold you down but
you will have the last laugh yet

Remember the day when
You'd never wanna leave your bed
Your thought where all jumping around
Like there is a war zone in you head

Remember the evening
Where you never felt more alone
Where you sat feeling sorry for yourself
Whilst staring hopelessly at your phone

There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
They may hold you down but
you will have the last laugh yet

There will be good time
Then it all can be a mess
Just take each day with a pinch of salt
With a smile marked fancy dress

It will take effort
So If you tired then take a rest
Don't allow them to press your buttons
Now you are coming close to your best

There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
They may hold you down
but you will have the last laugh yet

Don't let the failing of the past effect your mind set
Don't let the world gather you up In its void of regret
They will fight to keep you down but il take that bet
Because you best believe you'll have the last laugh yet

There is a light at the end of the tunnel but you haven't quite finished yet
Don't look back at where you've been because they won't let you forget
Washed off the pain of the past however your hair might still be wet
They may hold you down but
you will have the last laugh yet

I see what your going for not bad but rap a lil cocky man the templates there get comfortable with it