Help translate my rap into French!

[Ultimate DJ]

Hello,
I am trying to translate a rap i wrote into french. I have it in english and portuguese already.
The hard part is obviously so it still rhymes but you have complete liberity to change and alter the lines as long as a similar idea is conveyed.
Thanks a lot:

I will never give up I will never give in
I will keep on fighting til this battle I win
you can say that i won’t but you don’t know where i’ve been
pull the sword from this stone build a warrior within


I’m not about to allow a lot of doubt to bring me down
dont ever count me out cause I’mma mount up from the ground
I’ve not forgot not gon stop till I’m atop the clouds
an astronaut that’s got a shot to turn his world around

Truth is that I’m choosing all the bruises and
removing all excuses as I’m moving into this future
like I’m superhuman

Is the first part.
Thanks again!

[Wuljfrs]

Hi! Are you still working on this?

Just as a tip, a lot of French verbs endings rhyme: infinitive forms (especially those ending with -er and -ir), same for past participles (respectively -é and -i), future tenses... So that would be an easy trick to make basically every line rhyme.

However, I would have a hard time making this sound good, I think you'd better work with a French rapper? or at list listen to a lot of French rap if you have some notions. But I can still try to help you if you want.

For example:
I will never give up I will never give in
A lot of verbs would fit and rhyme: abandonner, céder, capituler, succomber, renoncer... rhyme with a lot of past participles like gagné, enduré... retirer l'épée du rocher, guerrier... they all sound like [e].
or future tense: abandonnerai, céderai etc. all rhyme with jamais, vrai... and sound like [ɛ] (or [ɛː] I'm not sure)

Good luck!