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  1. barbe63 said:

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    Hey, I'm requiring some help for a quick review of my text, just to see if there are any mistakes (I'm French and want English texts)
    It's for metal songs that you can listen here if you wish: https://soundcloud.com/gab-daud/sets
    Please keep in mind that this is not the final sound yet.
    The automatic corrector doesn't see any mistakes except "Poki" which is a company name and "Diga a mesa" which is a mix of languages.
    Thanks for your time!

    The texts:

    Gone
    ____

    Gone
    Will I remain gone

    My eyes hint I don't listen anyway
    Should I deny that I just nod to save the day
    I realize that I don't have anything to say
    Nothing arises I don't care I'm many miles away

    Will I remain gone

    Alone embrace your past before decay
    A last regard it can't sting enjoy the ride
    Add it some lies change a bit I can't stay on the road
    Past in disguise I don't care I'm many miles away

    Why be here while I can
    Dream anytime anywhere
    Dude can't you get
    We're gonna need some psych here
    Too far too late
    My mind get out to whistle

    Away
    It feels like home when my mind's flying away
    Wasted time for you
    Don't do the same
    Don't you dare

    Gone
    Will I remain gone

    Now I design a future time a play
    Maybe delusion will becomes real on a good day
    It is unwise to enjoy being lead astray
    Not a surprise I don't care I'm so many miles away

    Why would you try in vain
    Pretend you are unaware
    Dude can't you get
    We're gonna need some psych here
    Too far too late
    My mind get out to whistle

    Under curfew
    I can be with you if you need me
    I still care for you tell me what you want
    I'll share my view
    Tell me maybe I can help you if I am given the right to
    Conceive this through
    I believe I'm starting to get lost
    To think caused me to be blast away

    Away
    It feels like home when my mind's flying away
    Wasted time for you
    Don't do the same
    I am away
    It feels like home when my mind's flying away
    Wasted time for you
    Don't do the same
    Struggle to be careful


    Protest
    _______

    Fascism all around the game
    You can play
    You are the crowd don't act as preys
    Don't get it wrong
    Cynic or cool are not the same
    Be social
    You think they lead don't be that scared
    We'll direct ourselves

    The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
    Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world

    Another day another shame
    In plain sight
    We should decide to make them pay
    Don't wait too long
    Nothing in mind won't make you sane
    They coerce you
    Don't think one sec you will be spared
    Can we stop them now?

    The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
    Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world

    You and all the rest of the folks should take the power right now
    I'm trying something your idleness does nothing for improvement
    Go all the way go inside the melee
    Go all like if it was the last days
    Go all the way go inside the melee
    Go all like if it was the last mother****ing day

    The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
    Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world
    The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world (can we do something now)
    Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world (can we try hard this time)

    Protest more
    Contest power
    Protest more
    Contest power
    Protest more
    Contest power


    Broadcast
    _________

    There are signs
    That you're abused
    Turn it off this feeding of you
    Don't resign to this ritual
    The more you watch
    The worst for you (Stay away)

    Time to kneel, praise the mighty content shown
    Shown pastille tells the mind to cease
    I can feel time slowing down and down
    Down until everybody freeze

    There's a reason why we inform you
    The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
    You'd better listen to the story made for you
    On you to decide to trust

    I don't mind
    I don't need you
    The last one I need I hate you
    Recognize I can't fit in
    Being stuck in your beliefs
    No thank you (Farewell)

    Watch with zeal, gaze on whoever has crown
    Crown reveals how should think the bees
    Queen's appeal raised by a bunch of clowns
    Clowns distill whatever to please

    There's a reason why we inform you
    The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
    You'd better listen to the story made for you
    On you to decide to trust or freak out

    I'm going to jam the signal
    The signal that makes you stay
    I will tell you things that you need today, incoming cheap offer, time limited
    I will be inside the signal
    Before your eyes made of gray
    Time to reply, what you want for free, see me naked, save your life
    No

    Noises
    Don't bring the level down wait a second don't turn off (don't turn me off)
    Nightmares
    Can you live without my oversized wisdom (super wisdom)
    Charming
    Don't trust in the broadside we can see what's going on (what's going on)
    Toss it
    With all the knowledge stored, all the things we know (the things we know)
    Please can you ****ing go

    There's a reason why we inform you
    The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
    You'd better listen to the story made for you
    On you to decide to trust or freak out
    (Broadcast) There's a reason why we inform you
    The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
    (Broadcast) You'd better listen to the story made for you
    On you to decide to trust or freak out


    Jewel
    _____

    I'm waiting deep inside you
    Already digging some view
    Grooving wand made me a child of wonder (Pure warm core)
    Along the way

    You break out loud
    You little core
    Already on your way to glare
    Wanting to be more

    Pure jewel
    Made of metal
    Strongest core by far
    Says everyone
    Pure jewel
    Made of metal
    Has no sour nor scar
    No shame

    Glossing geek has found this array
    Discovering some gem
    Hoping that his young child will survive him
    Hide! Try to break inside them
    Move around, spread your insides of wonder (pure warm core)
    Along the way

    You became so proud
    You little core
    Gems like you are meant to be shared
    Last for evermore

    Pure jewel
    Made of metal
    Strongest core by far
    Says everyone
    Pure jewel
    Made of metal
    Has no sour nor scar
    No shame

    A wonder for
    Who made my core

    Another shiny gone in the rain
    Yet to discover a gem again
    Another shiny stone in a vein
    Yet to explore again and again


    Poki
    ____

    Now!

    Home step inside
    Try to heal your suffering mind
    You're home
    Safe for now
    Gone previous mind
    Keep your creepy scenes outside
    Just go
    Playful now

    Honey
    Tell when we can play
    Can we do
    Poki
    Let us be strong enough
    Cause we can

    Now!
    With friends that would be so cool

    Cold enterprise
    Made to sell for fast rise
    Our gold
    Deal right now
    Bald advertise
    Made for kiddies in king size
    Young crowd
    As cash cow

    Daddy
    Tell when we can play
    Can we do
    Poki
    Let us be strong enough
    Cause we can
    Mummy
    Tell when we can play
    We want some
    Poki
    We never have enough
    Cause we're kids

    Time runs out in the end of the final round
    Eyes on the screen in case I might stay if allowed
    The game is going to end end I tell you out loud
    You came in front **** you I can't see
    I can't watch the screen
    He's on his way to rise
    He's gonna take the head
    I can't stay

    Now I'd ****ing like that
    If only I could say my ****ing word
    So I could deny your crazy promptness
    You're severely dumb
    You pathetic god

    Come on!

    Daddy
    Tell when we can play
    Can we do
    Poki
    Let us be strong enough
    Cause we can
    Mummy
    Tell when we can play
    We want some
    Poki
    We never have enough
    Cause we're kids


    Both and neither
    _______

    I have no self esteem
    Do I

    Understatement time
    I don't remember, that's fine
    What was my last mind
    I'm not so sure down inside
    I should declare that to be fair
    The best I cannot find out

    I have no self esteem
    Do I

    Under siege you are
    Now please surrender, don't fight
    There's no need to lie
    Just say you did not decide
    I want to share that I don't care
    This way I could think I am...

    Young again
    Young again

    I have no self esteem


    Messed
    ______

    I know that your order
    Might believe I'm sad and insane
    In time I'll believe you
    We don't know when
    A strong smell of sweat flies (bizarre)
    Underneath lies a lack of care (caused by something unknown)
    Does this means that I don't (retard)
    Like you at all (please explain the unknown)

    This is the pain we don't know
    My mess
    So whine, keeping say
    Just about the pain still unknown
    Madness
    No one can explain
    Is it a lie
    The pain

    I can't see why you're dismayed
    So far you've never been so close
    To meet my very real self
    You don't know me
    Despite all that, this mess (bizarre)
    Doesn't hint I should stay alone (caused by something unknown)
    To be over the issue (retard)
    Is doable (please explain the unknown)

    All about the pain we don't know
    My mess
    So whine, keeping say
    Just about the pain still unknown
    Madness
    No one can explain
    Is it a lie
    The pain we don't know
    Care less
    So whine, keeping say
    Just about the pain still unknown
    Madness
    No one can explain
    Is this a lie

    Don't waste your time I don't really crave
    To be superficial
    Will you assess me on such cliches
    You're part of the problem

    Now I have everything so wrong
    In silence brood and then decide as I'm
    Aware that you bring the level down
    The final leaves us both in shame

    Pain we don't know
    Care less
    So whine, keeping say
    Just about the pain still unknown
    Madness
    No one can explain
    Is this a lie

    I must condemn your way to behave
    Call me an asocial
    My mess obsess you with such a craze
    Not smart, this is so lame

    You just care for the show
    Stop to look outside
    You may look for the soul
    Such bad behavior
    You just care for the show
    Stop to look outside
    You may look for the soul
    Not for the odor


    Rob
    ____

    Open a door
    Dream a last time
    I wonder
    I failed my goal
    Nonetheless you don't care
    Brother in soul
    Jump in if you care

    Jump in the river
    What else knowing that
    I am your son
    Diga a mesa the way
    I can use you
    Brother in soul

    Retain no more
    Give a last thought
    I wonder
    Ask for your role
    Whatever you can share
    Brother in soul
    Jump in if you dare

    Jump in the river
    What else knowing that
    I am your son
    Diga a mesa the way
    I can use you
    Brother in soul
    Jump in the river
    What else knowing that
    I am your son
    Diga a mesa the way
    I can use you
    Brother in soul

    Raise your head
    Animate my dream
    Join
    Can we simply get a new start
    Don't debate
    On the way you miss time
    Will you really just
    Walk away
    How could you
    Walk away
    Please think twice as you
    Walk away
    Last edited by barbe63; 09-25-2022 at 02:25 PM.