i started on this what do u think

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  1. cry_baby said: 04-21-2007 03:21 PM

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    my life ls filled with pain
    everyday i must pry,
    god help help me
    through the day
    just answer me
    just take it away


    *yep still needs work*
     

  2. RapJunkie said: 04-21-2007 07:37 PM

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    I don't like it, it's to short and don't rhyme or nothing i mean it got a good meaning and stuff but I just don't like it..
     

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    Pesky said: 05-27-2007 12:57 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by cry_baby View Post
    my life ls filled with pain
    everyday i must pry,
    god help help me
    through the day
    just answer me
    just take it away


    *yep still needs work*
    Your spelling and grammar are right on -- which is much more than can be said for some.
     

  4. bruno_rancid said: 11-04-2008 07:26 PM

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    i think the lyric is great but i dont know who sings this
    please tell me if you know
    sendme a email to bruno_rancid@hotmail.com

    thank you!
     

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    Ultimate_Worrier said: 11-05-2008 03:03 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pesky View Post
    Your spelling and grammar are right on
    God has a capital G and sentences not started with a capital
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.
     

  6. Klukoklai said: 11-05-2008 12:02 PM

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    I guess it sound OK, even though its very short and not my type of song at all.
    It makes me think of My chemical romance, Neils children or even silencer :P
    Hope your life is better than that
    Last edited by Klukoklai; 11-06-2008 at 12:22 PM.
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!