My Dear Boy

MY DEAR BOY

I need to get away from this
I need to get away from here

Today the tears roll down inside
The veins they flow with fresh saline

Why the hell did you wait this long
You should have never written this song

There’s one more chance to say goodbye
Or maybe say hello
There’s always times to sit and cry
So take the one that’s there… tonight

Tomorrow the tears roll down inside
The arteries flow with fresh saline

Will it be tears of rage
Or tears of joy
It’s up to you
My dear boy

There’s one more chance to say goodbye
Or maybe say hello
There’s always times to sit and cry
So take the one that’s there… tonight

She’s sitting there
Her slender body aches for you
You’re sitting there
Your body tells you not to…

Can you fight the coward that lies inside
Can you make her happy tonight?

There’s one more chance to say goodbye
Or maybe say hello
There’s always times to sit and cry
So take the one that’s there… tonight

There’s one more chance to say goodbye
Or maybe say hello
There’s always times to sit and cry
So take the one that’s there… tonight!

Hi! I think that those are really good! I like the way that you provide suspense, you build up to what has happened, very cleverly done!