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  1. yourlifestorywales said:

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    And it’s serene
    In the silence of the heavy falling snow
    All alone
    Leaving all the things he used to know
    In the cabin his tears freeze
    He wants you to know…

    It’s not your fault
    Stop the blaming and forget
    The things you’ve done
    This damn regret

    He’s broken
    He lays on the floor unable to talk
    Just thinking
    Of how you ripped his heart apart
    In the cabin his tears freeze
    He just wants you to know…

    It’s not your fault
    Stop the blaming and forget
    The things you’ve done
    This damn regret

    It’s not your fault
    Stop the blaming and forget
    The things you’ve done
    This damn regret

    It’s not your fault
    It’s not your fault
    He wants you to know
    It’s not your fault

    It’s not your fault
    Stop the blaming and forget
    The things you’ve done
    This damn regret

    It’s not your fault
    Stop the blaming and forget
    The things you’ve done
    This damn regret


    © Copyright 2007 Sam Evans



    It would be great if everyone could give a comment with their view on these lyrics as I haven't wrote one in a while now. Thanks alot, SAM.
     
  2. soosa said:

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    I think it's a lot of the same, 5 refrains, and the 2 couplettes are kinda much like each other too. You should add some more diversity. Even though it has some feeling, It's kinda cool at first but it started to bore me.
     
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    SpudMunky said:

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    Hey there! Those lyrics are really well written but I do have to agree with soosa, they do need some more verses somewhere to break the lyrics up a bit more to give more interest, but otherwise those lyrics are really well written!
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