Truth In The Lies

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  1. Patient Dreams said:

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    In relationships a lot of times, words are said to one another about how they feel ,for each other. Sometimes out of protection for the others feelings, and other times for protection of ones self. There comes the moments when words just aren’t enough. It’s then that you realize what you relationship is based around.

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    @ 5/29/07 Lyneva Starbuck
    Written by Lyneva Starbuck
    Music by Frank Marinko

    You’re sick, of all my lies
    You say, there’s no compromise
    My words, don’t mean a thing
    And you’re waking up from a bad dream

    Tell me, what I want to hear
    Show me, I have nothing to fear
    Give me, some kind of sign
    And I’ll give you everything that’s mine

    When the words are only words weathered in time
    And the comfort that we feel is deep inside

    How can you say you love me more than more than life
    Where’s the truth in all the lies
    How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
    That’ll be the truth in all our lies
    How can your love for me be more than this
    Where’s the truth in all the lies
    Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright

    Tell me, what you want from me
    Show me, if you want me to see
    Give me, the dreams of your youth
    And let me become your living proof

    You’re sick, of all my lies
    You say, there’s no compromise
    My words, don’t mean a thing
    And you’re waking up from a bad dream

    When the words are only words weathered in time
    And the comfort that we feel is deep inside

    How can you say you love me more than more than life
    Where’s the truth in all the lies
    How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
    That’ll be the truth in all our lies
    How can you love for me be more than this
    Where’s the truth in all the lies
    Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright

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    SpudMunky said:

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    Hi there! These lyrics are so good! I love them. It sounds like it's coming from experience and even if it's not there are still alot of people who can relate to it still. Great quality of writing, very expressive and a theme that didn't get confused at any point! Very nice
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    Dexy said:

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    you should writte Where´s the truth in all THOSE lies it´s better to hear, but that´s your text you can do everything you want it´s just my opinion
    Last edited by Dexy; 09-05-2007 at 11:46 AM. Reason: lol
     
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    I really liked your lyrics. I think anyone can relate to the experience of telling the other what they want to hear, but that may not be necessarily the truth. Great theme, and great lyrics.
    Ah! Maybe the second time it is repeated you could change the line "Can we go on pretending it´s gonna be alright?" into "Can we go on pretending this is not a lie?" or something of the sort. Hope you find this suggestion useful!
     
  5. Patient Dreams said:

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    Thanks guy for the reviews so far. We try to write songs that make people think and relate or just smile to themselves. Even have a couple that question the present government. Music in our book should move and do things without force. We are analyzing your suggestion and they are greatly noted. Thanks.
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