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  1. *thisishowwe'lldancewhen* said:

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    just wanna know what people think, i'm never sure if what i write is considered good
    oh yeah and it'd be cool if someone could help out with a title

    I can’t get my stupid eyes to look away
    I can’t stop my mind from thinking
    that maybe this time
    we’ll start something

    and my pulse it races
    I can feel it flowing
    through every vein I have

    this time we’ll start something
    and we won’t be allowed to stop
    just drag it out, we’ll go all night
    and my mind is racing
    I can’t look away from you

    my heart is beating
    as my thoughts run wild
    I will never fall away
    we can take turns and we’ll feel so foolish
    but we’ve tried it all way too many times

    maybe we’ll start something this time
    and we won’t ever end this
    my pulse is beating, I fade away
    you can’t look away from her
     
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    Spring said:

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    I like your song! Maybe call it "Wrong Direction"