wat do you think of this song

my first ever written song. Iv written some other songs, but since i am new to this site i want to know wat you guys think.



I SIT AND THINK WHY THE WORLD IS LIKE THIS
I SIT AND WONDER WHY OH WHY
CAUSE SOONER OR LATER ITS GONNA BE TIME.

CHORUS:
WHEN WILL THIS WORLD SEE THAT WE NEED JESUS
WHEN WILL THEY OPEN THEIR EYES AND REALIZE

''''HE LOVES US''''
WHY CANT THEY SEE THAT WE NEED HIM
WATS IT GONNA TAKETO REALIZE

BRIDGE:
IS IT GONNA TAKE ANOTHER WAR
IS IT GONNA TAKE MORE MOURNING

BACK TO CHORUS

I like the lyrics, but i think it is hard to imagine how it sounds, do you have a way to upload the music somewhere?

What you say is true, we wont understand how much we need him untill it is too late...I like it brother. Keep praising His name. Music is a very beautifull way to share about Him, dont you think?

Interesting lyrics.
When you say: "CAUSE SOONER OR LATER ITS GONNA BE TIME", what do you really mean? To the end of the world? the end of the grace?
"bk believes" is right, it is hard to figure the whole picture without the melody.
Keep working hard for our God!