my first ever written song. Iv written some other songs, but since i am new to this site i want to know wat you guys think.
I SIT AND THINK WHY THE WORLD IS LIKE THIS
I SIT AND WONDER WHY OH WHY
CAUSE SOONER OR LATER ITS GONNA BE TIME.
CHORUS:
WHEN WILL THIS WORLD SEE THAT WE NEED JESUS
WHEN WILL THEY OPEN THEIR EYES AND REALIZE
''''HE LOVES US''''
WHY CANT THEY SEE THAT WE NEED HIM
WATS IT GONNA TAKETO REALIZE
BRIDGE:
IS IT GONNA TAKE ANOTHER WAR
IS IT GONNA TAKE MORE MOURNING
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