This Love

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  1. Mike...18 said:

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    I wrote this in like 20 minutes... Let me know what you think

    Climbing these stairs to get away from this ungrateful earth
    Trying to find your helping hand in the midst of all this sin
    I can’t open my eyes because I’m covered deep in sorrow
    I continue forward, continue to fight the pain
    When I finally reach the top of this never-ending fight
    I want to see you there with open arms, waiting to take me in
    After fighting hard to stay true to myself, I deserve to feel your love
    Years have past were I could have fallen into sin
    Ever so often I look past what could have been the end
    When I reach the clouds on my journey to find your grace
    I want to feel free of the demons that tied me down to this earth
    I’m almost there I can feel the presence of your warmth
    Just a few more steps and I’ll be in the arms of your love
    My prayers have been answered; you helped get me here
    Oh Lord your love makes me feel alive again
     
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    Gleabs said:

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    It's good, except that it doesn't really rhym. Go over it a couple of times and try to change words in the end so the words would rhym. Good luck!
    Last edited by webmaster; 03-30-2008 at 07:05 AM. Reason: unnecessary quote
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