I walk by my solo

Look me in my face you cant see my struggle
Cause i always smile so nobody can see my troubles
I do what i do to try and maintain
I keep fleeing from these streets but they keep calling my name
PLease heavenly father help me i need an assist
Cause on a nine to five a brother man just cannot exist
I cant get help from my fam because them people make me loco
But id die for my fam and still im walkin by my solo

I dont have to be no thug but they know not to test my gangster
And you messin with my fam man your life is whats in danger
Different person when i anger so please dont get him started
Cause that brothers got no sense and i think that he's retarded
Please father forgive me for my sins cause look what i done did again
Thought i done kicked him out but i guess that persons trapped within
He dont come around to often but he's stronger than before
I try to escape the hatred but it keeps knocking at my door
Evereade Mr smore do it big and soldier boy
All these personalities i done created to try to come fill the void
Gettin beat as a little boy created a passion for fightin
But instead of killin these people i express my anger thru the writins
All these lyrics im recitin is a look inside my past
Im fleein from these personas and im screamin out free at last
Maybe im just dreamin believin i can escape my demons
But nothin is too much for the God that i believe in
Dear heavenly father help me i need an assist
My life is too much and i aint ask for nan none of this
My momma smokin dope my sister snortin coke my daddy just a joke
My sixteen year old sister pregnant by a twenty two year old
Why i refuse to back down cause all my life had to step it up
Even if i catch a beat down im still goin have to knuckle up
I aint out here actin tough im doin what i gotta do
Cause tell me what else could i do when i got nothin else to lose but

Look me in my face you cant see my struggle
Cause i always smile so nobody can see my troubles
And i do what i do to try and maintain
I keep fleeing from these streets but they keep calling my name
PLease heavenly father help me i need an assist
Cause off a nine to five a brother man just cannot exist
I cant get help from my fam because them people make me loco
But id die for my fam and still im walkin by my solo


There is another verse somebody tell me if you would like to read the lyrics tell me what yall think please

It's not bad for hip hop but a few things...

1. Try not to use too many rhyming couplets unless you purposfully meant the track to sound old school...

2. It's gangsta not gangster. Most hip hops guys would lose in a heartbeat against real gangsters.

Thank you for the criticism i appreciate your viewpoint. The reason i say gangster is how i pronounce it im my song. When i say they know not to test my gangster it means that when it comes down to it i can have some gangster like tendencies not a random drive by or anything of the such but if im coming for you it is with a precise accuaracy and planned out scheme like gangsters and not gangstas. I am truly not any type of thug or gangster that is why say i dont have to be a thug but like any man on this earth if you were to threaten his family his inner gangsta or gangster would come to the front.

1. It wsn't a criticism, it was advice

2. I never said you were a gangsta, I said that's how it's spelt in that context .

3. I do agree with you about defending your family and friends. I have friends that would - how would we say - Take a bullet for me and bring the other guy down with him and I'd do the same for them too.

When i used the word criticism i didnt mean it in a negative way i was refereing to constuctive criticism and i truly appreciate it.