The G-Man has Arrive

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  1. G-Man said:

    Default The G-Man has Arrive

    For me,
    rhyming is such a big habbit.
    that when I see a mike,
    I have to grab it.
    Now I like to come out mellow but I can be graphic,
    able to run havoc,
    to create so much tragic,
    than the deepest black magic.
    My skills are so fantastic,
    it create so much static,
    when I make my cd,
    You should want to gab it.



    Corus

    The G-man has arrive with a lot of power,
    I can be sweet or sour.
    with the skills I aquire,
    it makes me hot like Fire,
    I will use it and abuse it to create my empire.
    The G-Man has Arrive,
    the G-Man has Arrive.

    I have created a new rap skill,
    that will be hot like meat on a flaiming grill.
    When my rhymes and the mike begin to create merger,
    ill eat many skills up like a fatman eating an Hamburger.
    I be rhyming everday,
    yet even when I miss days,
    my skills stay.
    They may never go away.
    The only way I go,
    is when the Lord to tell me so.
    When he take me away,
    I will be one of the best rappers till this day.
    See I have many rhymes that I make into verses,
    that they are able to fill many universes.
    My skills are the highest possible,
    when I reaching the sky,
    I'll be almost unstappable.

    The G-mAN HAS ARRIVE!!
    If I misspell words, I'm sorry
    Some vocabulary may be messed up to.
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    The G-man gotta take a reality check lol JK, it's look pretty god but i found some misspell words such as "Flaiming" it is "Flaming" and "Habbit" is "Habit". in the first stanza you have it "Able to run havoc" that's wrong, people say "to Wreak havoc" after than that it's good
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.