I need an opinion on my song, it's a musical song

My brother thinks it's too repetative, what do you think?


Miss Molly

We’ll go down to the Ozdust rockin’ and a rollin’ all night
Keep dancing whoa keep dancing
We’ll be boogyin’ down ‘till the morning light
Don’t stop it no don’t stop it
But when we all get tired, there’s one girl that’s still fired
When the rest of us are beat, she’ll be dancing down the street
She’s Miss Molly
Go go go go go go go

Go Miss Molly you’re shakin’ to that Baltimore beat
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
Go Miss Molly those are super fast dancing feet
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
She can hip-hop
Pops like a mop
She’s Miss Molly

She’s been dancing like Tracy ever since she could walk
Tracy Turnblad, Just like Tracy Turnblad
She could play the piano before she learned to talk
Whoa Molly! Whoa whoa Molly!
But when it comes to school
She drives the teachers up the wall
All she does is sing and dance
They say it’s not a musical
Oh Miss Molly!

Go Miss Molly you’re shakin’ to that Baltimore beat
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
Go Miss Molly those are super fast dancing feet
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
She can hip-hop
Pops like a mop
She’s Miss Molly
Go Miss Molly you’re shakin’ to that Baltimore beat
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
Go Miss Molly those are super fast dancing feet
Miss Molly, go Miss Molly
She can hip-hop
Pops like a mop
She’s Miss Molly

It all depends on the tune.
If people like it, they'll want it to keep on going (like Miss Molly).

They're not bad but:

1. All songs are musical
2. What does "pops like a mop" mean?

i think she ment like musical as in a play type of a musical
and i like it alot! but i too wanna no what "pop like a mop" means

Oh, ok... Sorry - just "it's a musical song" doesn't make much sense

Yeah OK, well pop like a mop is a dance move where you shake your hair around, like it's a mop, but yeah it doesn't quite make sense in the song, I might change it.

You mean like the Beatles...

Huh? I wasn't thinking of that but now you mention it... I still have no clue what you mean!

Its petty good, But i wish i could no what the musical was about!

I don't actually know, I just made this song about my friend for a musical, but I haven't really got a story for the musical

it's really good, but as atmaster said it all depends on the tune

It has some really good lines, like
"She could play the piano before she learned to talk"
I like that. But it is rather repetative

I agree, it is rather repetative

i like it,
and sometimes if it has a cool message,
being repetitive is a good thing!

It's to the tune of greased lightening

Originally Posted by Tracy-Turnblad

I agree, it is rather repetative

Yea the names are repeated alot. Love it though...great idea! Maybe use some pronouns or change it up a bit so you don't have to repeat the names so much.

i reaally like it