Stars in the sky

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  1. OmegaAlienLR said:

    Default Stars in the sky

    Look, up to the sky
    See, the stars in the night
    Watch them sit, Majesticly
    Out, for the whole wide world to see
    See you, in the night
    See the stars shine in your eyes
    Pull you close, won’t let go
    I want the whole entire world too know

    How I feel, when I’m with you
    Doing all, the things you do
    And what I see
    What I see for you and me
    Because in your eyes
    In your eyes, is the whole night sky

    Do you, see the moon? So full and bright
    Giving us, our only light
    shining over your face,
    I never want to leave this place
    And I’ll pull you close, won’t let go
    Until the whole wide world knows

    How I feel, when I’m with you
    Doing all, the things you do
    And what I see
    What I see for you and me
    Because in your eyes
    In your eyes, is the whole night sky
    And when I see your face
    I never wanna leave this place

    And that night we saw a sign
    A comet flew by, so divine
    Pulled you close, wouldn’t let go
    Because I now know that you are mine
    Pulled you close, wouldn’t let go
    and I wanted the Whole ****ing World to know

    How I feel, when I’m with you
    Doing all, the things you do
    And what I see
    What I see for you and me
    Because in your eyes
    In your eyes, is the whole night sky
    And when I see your face
    I never wanna leave this place
    And I want the world to know, most importantly
    That I’m with you, and you’re with me
    Tonight
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    It's awesome! One thing though, i'm not too sure about the line, 'And that night we saw a sign, A comet flew by, so divine' I alsothought of an alternative title, 'sky in your eyes'
     
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    Jester said:

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    Stars in your eyes sound much more... Sayable
    "...One likes to believe in the freedom of music
    but glittering prizes and endless compromises shatter the illusion of integrity."
     
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    smileforme_emily said:

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    i really like this!
    keep writing.
    & i agree with jester
    stars in your eyes is a more appropriate title...
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    That was my immediate thought, but I though there's too many songs with that title