Figure It Out (rough Draft 1)

I don't care what you say
Its your fault I feel this way
I don't care what you think
Your constant lies are pushing me to the brink

I dont care what you say
I dont care what you think
All I know is that
You'r enot the boss of me

Chorus:
I listened to your lies
I fell for your plan
I hope your happy now
I guess this is the end
All the pieces fir together
I see the big picture now
I can't belive I was so blinded
That I couldnt figure it out

You tried to hide him from me
And by some stupid fluke it worked
If I could have just seen
I wouldn't have been so hurt

Why did you lie?
Why did you cheat?
As I sit here and cry
I feel so incomplete

Chorus:
I listened to your lies
I fell for your plan
I hope your happy now
I guess this is the end
All the pieces fit together
I see the big picture now
I can't believe I was so blinded
That I couldnt figure it out

You told me i was your world
That without me you couldnt breathe
You told me not to worry
Because there was no way you could leave

I don't care what you say
Its your fault I feel this way (way way way)

Chorus:
I listened to your lies
I fell for your plan
I hope your happy now
I guess this is the end
All the pieces fit together
I see the big picture now
I can't believe I was so blinded
That I couldnt figre it out
(couldnt figure it out)

I couldnt let the impression that it might sound like some of Ne-Yo's songs, if you know the artist

lol kinda yah....is that a good thing to you or not?

With some corrections it could be good for that kind of music

"All I know is that
You'r enot the boss of me"

im not sure i get how this fits into the song.
it sounds like its about someone lying or cheating so i dont understand why you would say they arent the boss of you.

but other than that, i think its really good

I like it, it sounds great. Wish I could hear the tune

The rest of the song is good but the first verse isn't... Sorry but it sounds like you're just trying to rhyme things and good songs don't go like that.