Dumb Girl 1 and 2

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  1. the 808 said:

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    Dumb Girl


    I know you
    Or at least i used to
    You’ve changed since you got back with him
    I see your face
    It’s not a better place
    I just so know where that face has been

    (chorus)

    You tell me what i am
    And you know my master plan
    But you’re wrong again
    I guess im just the wrong man
    You tell me what i am
    And you know my master plan
    But you’re wrong again
    I guess you’re just a dumb girl


    I know your name
    The stories are the same
    Lies are twisted but the rumours end up true
    We are still friends
    I thought there was an end
    Caused by all the **** you put me through

    (chorus)

    So bottle it up inside
    Save it for a rainy day
    Take it out on me
    You’re going to anyway
    x2

    (Chorus)


    Inside info time. I like girl, girl is 'fond' of me. Girl is also a total ****, however i didnt see it at the time. She took all her problems out on me, i had enough and we fell out. I wrote this when we started talking about 2 months later.




    Dumb Girl 2


    I didn’t plan for this
    But you’re back
    And i lack
    The ability to not give in

    Okay i’ll do you but thats it

    Chorus:
    Physically perfect
    But mentally deranged
    My chance to do you
    Can it be arranged
    Physically perfect
    But mentally deranged
    After all that’s happened
    I guess i’ll do the dumb girl

    The side that i like
    Is the side thats ****
    Because you’re fit
    Im probably not going to win

    Okay you’re a **** but thats it

    (chorus)

    Nights out at 15
    Lights out at 3am
    Cant you get up off your knees to realise?
    Your friends are dickheads
    So get with me instead
    Cant you get up off your knees to realise?

    Okay i’ll do you but thats it

    (chorus)



    This was done recently where, after not talking for at least 5 months, we started talking again. She 'hangs' around the area i do at school. Basically, i would do her over and over and over. To put it bluntly. Hey, im 15, what else do you expect me to write about?
     
  2. texter-bernd said:

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    So bottle it up inside
    Save it for a rainy day
    Take it out on me
    You’re going to anyway

    That's great! That rocks in my ear.

    Cool man!

    Bernd
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    Sounds like something Blink 182 would do...

    Schoolkid type angst
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.
     
  4. the 808 said:

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    Thanks Bernd, glad you like.

    Ultimate Worrier, im 15, what would you think i'll write about...? lol
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    Erm... Cars?

    Movies?

    Trying to get girls and not insulting them?



    Girls have friends, if you insult them, they tell their friends and then those friends also think you're an idiot... Don't insult girls.
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.
     
  6. BRITSTA28 said:

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    I love it!! Great Job

    This stuff doesn't stop at high school , unfortunetly girls do this.. I have done this way after highschool. I think people can relate to this at any age. I can't imagine how good your writing will be as you get older .. keep it up
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    To be honest, the writing is good as far as spelling goes but really the subject matter is just angsty and insulting.
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.