Don't Want You- read and Review

Wow. Yes, I know, almost all of my songs are about boys. I wrote this one based on a true story. so, uhhh here it is.

Don't Want You
By: Emm
Album: ?

Stop you in your tracks
you ask, why do I look at you like that
maybe it's because, I need you in my life
and your the only one, of your beautiful kind

♥and it's like whoa
what have I gotten into-oo
this love is too deep
even for me
you start a fight
just to add drama to life
your not the guy
that I thought you were
you looked so fly
and so down to earth
and now I don't want you♥

but, no, I haven't forgot you--
and all them memories we shared
wish I was there not here
and I don't look down on you

cause your the one I wanted!
the only one I don't regret!
and now you changed the story
why did you flip the script

♥and it's like whoa
what have I gotten into-oo
this love is too deep
even for me
you start a fight
just to add drama to life
your not the guy
that I thought you were
you looked so fly
and so down to earth
and now I don't want you♥

and I know I can't return you
like the clothes I wair
and I know you don't want me too
and it feels worse and worse
everytime I think about it

maybe I still want you--

and it's like whoa
what have I gotten into-oo
maybe this is what I need
a love to deep
why do you start a fight
don't want drama in my life
your not the guy
that I thought you were
you looked so fly
and so down to earth
and maybe I still want you

and it's like whoa
oh it's like whoa-oa-oa-oa-oa

♥and it's like whoa
what have I gotten into-oo
this love is too deep
even for me
you start a fight
just to add drama to life
your not the guy
that I thought you were
you looked so fly
and so down to earth
and now I don't want you♥

or maybe I do-oo-oo

Not bad, ver Paramore of Avril but not as crappy lyrically (probably /cos you wrote those yourself, she uses other people to write her lyrics)

thanks