3rd attempt at lyrics

[Verse]
Run for your life
cos i am hot on your trail
my young confident girl
dont you now feel so frail

tears mix with sweat
to the floor they drip
i will take my time
soon you will slip

[Pre-chorus]
cant you feel your chest
so tightly drawn
cant you feel the air
of coming dawn

[Chorus]
i walk this place
thinking of what ive done
i see your face
burnt and scarred and left in horror

[Verse 2]
tread with cautious
cos im on every corner
i will only wait
wait a little longer

i swoop in to
grab you my pearl
i should of known
you were the wrong girl

[solo]

[Chorus]
i walk this place
thinking of what ive done
i see your face
burnt and scarred and left in horror
left in shame,
left in hope
youd live again

outro solo

well done my friend

They're ok... I like 'em

hmmm very well done. The text got a certain energy

Neat-o