New Member Beginner

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  1. outlawz213 said: 10-31-2008 08:41 AM

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    HI, NEW MEMBER, joined to see many people writing , so i thought i have a quick go.

    trying to write
    This came out whilst i was trying to write
    get the juices flowing till my mind is right
    lookin at the forumz for inspiration still
    am in hesatation
    finally get this down know people going to frown
    callin me the forum clown
    however my first attempt come back later for my
    main event!!!!

  2. Klukoklai said: 11-05-2008 05:00 AM

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    deep man ;P
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!

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    Ultimate_Worrier said: 11-05-2008 05:06 AM

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    Too many rhyming couplets, not enough good spelling
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.

  4.  Klukoklai said: 11-06-2008 12:27 PM

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    You should probably not use this in any song ever :P
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!

  5.  Yeroc Rellek said: 11-14-2008 10:24 PM

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    ummm is that rap?

  6. starinthehood said: 08-24-2009 01:15 AM

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    sound alright bro.
    check mine out.
    much love.