Turn You Away

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    zoniq said: 11-08-2008 05:08 PM

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    Last edited by zoniq; 02-23-2009 at 01:05 AM.

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    zoniq said: 11-10-2008 02:57 AM

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    plz i want opinion for this song..!im a bit comfused about this is it too short or what?anything..

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    Ultimate_Worrier said: 11-10-2008 04:09 AM

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    Quote Originally Posted by zoniq View Post
    i was stoned from your lies by forever
    the bonds between us i could never sever

    im leaving forever
    i wont come back, never

    im wont believe you again ill just getaway
    now i cant stand this im running way away
    Those lines don't scan...

    Never sever

    Back, never

    Way away


    they're too long for the song... Try
    I'm leaving forever, these ties I shall sever
    * Difference of opinion is not argument, only difference.
    * Just because you don't like something, doesn't make it sh*t
    * You are all individual, just like everyone else.

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    zoniq said: 11-10-2008 09:39 AM

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    yes yes i see now you are right..thank you i think i will change it this way it feels better..
    Last edited by zoniq; 11-12-2008 at 09:24 AM.

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    zoniq said: 11-10-2008 03:40 PM

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    i see it now its better this way..thanx for the help worrier..