This I don't consider finished. It's work in progress, so comments and suggestions are most welcome. I don't particularly like the rhyme "return" - "turn", neither am I happy with the "final last straw". Maybe I'll leave the latter anyway, it's as stupid as "a little bit" - and less common. Also, I'm still not happy with the last line of the first verse "looks like the end of me". It's too pathetic.
no sense of direction
in a dark and stormy sea
the mist obscures my vision
looks like the end of me
so I'm lost
I don't know a way out
have I crossed
the point of no return?
will there be
a final last straw
just for me
so that I can turn
got stuck in a traffic jam
the turnoff should be near
if I'll manage to change the lane
I've got no idea
So I'm lost ...
the distances are shortened
the clocks on earth are slow
which is my destination
I might never know