Kill Or Die

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    zoniq said:

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    Last edited by zoniq; 02-23-2009 at 02:04 AM.
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    not bad but this verse

    be hard as a shell,survive from hell
    from wounds get well,your stories tell

    Is a bit... I dunno, unless it's a bridge then it's cool



    These lyrics sum up war best:

    Bodies fill the fields I see, hungry heroes end
    No one to play soldiers now, no one to pretend
    running blind through killing fields, bred to kill them all
    A victim of what said should be
    a servant `til I fall


    Soldier boy, made of clay
    now an empty shell
    twenty one, only son
    but he served us well
    Bred to kill, not to care
    do just as we say
    finished here, Greetings Death
    he's yours to take away


    Back to the front
    you will do what I say, when I say
    Back to the front
    you will die when I say, you must die
    Back to the front
    you coward
    you servant
    you blindman


    Barking of machinegun fire, does nothing to me now
    sounding of the clock that ticks, get used to it somehow
    More a man, more stripes you bare, glory seeker trends
    bodies fill the fields I see
    the slaughter never ends


    Soldier boy, made of clay
    now an empty shell
    twenty one, only son
    but he served us well
    Bred to kill, not to care
    just do as we say
    finished here, Greeting Death
    he's yours to take away


    Back to the front
    you will do what I say, when I say
    Back to the front
    you will die when I say, you must die
    Back to the front
    you coward
    you servant
    you blindman

    Why, Am I dying?
    Kill, have no fear
    Lie, live off lying
    Hell, Hell is here


    I was born for dying


    Life planned out before my birth, nothing could I say
    had no chance to see myself, molded day by day
    Looking back I realize, nothing have I done
    left to die with only friend
    Alone I clench my gun


    Soldier boy, made of clay
    now an empty shell
    twenty one, only son
    but he served us well
    Bred to kill, not to care
    just do as we say
    finished here, Greeting Death
    he's yours to take away


    Back to the front
    you will do what I say, when I say
    Back to the front
    you will die when I say, you must die
    Back to the front
    you coward
    you servant
    you blindman


    Back to the front.
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    zoniq said:

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    be hard as a shell,survive from hell
    from wounds get well,your stories tell

    this is going to be very hard rock..you know..

    BE HARD AS A SHELL
    SURVIVE FROM HELL
    FROM WOUNDS GET WELL
    YOUR STORIES TELL
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    Putting some words in capitals does not really give me a sense of the music you'll be playing...


    Hard rock is usually AC/DC style or do you mean metal (Metallica)

    What I mean is:

    if those words are in a normal verse, don't rhyme the last words together
    shell - hell -well - tell

    If they're in the bridge, then that's fine
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