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    Default What Is Feeling 4

    k you don't have to agree on any of what i say in this
    this i wrote about how i feel about feelings and our words that we use to explain them but i put them into my perspective

    Hope you enjoy it

    WHAT IS FEELING 4

    Fear is universal knolege in for the few

    Faith is fear of damnation and a hope for something new

    Strength is for heros and leaders

    Fear has weged it self in those who wait

    Curage is steping out of line standing out and testin fait

    Pacients is lack of action or being afraid of making mistakes

    Hate is baing less then those you hate

    Truse is when you lost your way needing someone to set you straight

    Love is wanting something more

    When your tired of being the only soilder in lifes endless war

    /Tell me what is feeling for and What if i don't want it anymore

    I'm so tired of this endless fight so i'll shut the door till i make it right/

    Second is just the first loser to cross the line

    Your ahead of some but still behind

    Shame is regret in the face of others for what you've done or what you might

    Heros want to make all safe and sound

    The result of evil or the other way around

    Sheep follow the shepard cause they want the same thing

    He just wants it more

    They follow him to war

    They soon realize they nolonger know what there fighting for

    But to the slaughter they poor and poor
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    again,

    Make It Grammarized like :

    "Shame is regret in the face of others for what you've done or what you might

    Heros want to make all safe and sound

    The result of evil or the other way around

    Sheep follow the shepard cause they want the same thing "
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    instead of:

    shame is regret in the face of others for what you've done or what you might

    heros want to make all safe and sound

    the result of evil or the other way around

    sheep follow the shepard cause they want the same thing

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    thank for your input i love it it helps alot

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    It is good I like it and I like how you did say what you thought everything means- to you.

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    thanks and and ya i didnt want to offend anyone

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    i can relate to wat u feelin about feelings man, dis is gud

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    thanks an glad someone can relate to it bro

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    New input on old stuff plz

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