You will be missed (Feedback please)

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    Daniel Terragar said:

    Post You will be missed (Feedback please)

    I see you everyday
    On every one of my picture frames
    Yesterdays done I understand
    You’ve moved on to the Promised Land
    I know you don’t move or breathe
    But it’s you that I need to see

    I wish I could see you every day
    But I know you’re gone
    I wish you could see me right now
    The mess you left alone
    You will be missed

    I know it’s not my fault
    I try to convince myself everyday
    I know I should try harder
    But I can’t knowing that you’re gone

    I wish I could see you every day
    But I know you’re gone
    I wish you could see me right now
    The mess you left alone
    You will be missed

    I know it’s not your fault
    Or so I would like to think that
    You left cause you wanted to
    And I understand completely
    Though your methods are questionable
    You left me without saying goodbye
    I thought that we were close
    I guess I was wrong about you

    I’m sure you had your reasons
    I’m sure you had your reasons?

    I wish I could see you every day
    But I know you’re gone
    I wish you could see me right now
    The mess you left alone
    You will be missed

    A song I've been working out for the past few days. I don't really like it that much but I want to hear what you guys think, so please and advice/feedback would be nice !
     
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    Daniel Terragar said:

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    thanks! anything in particular?