Dark and Cold

Look under this rainbow
And you’ll find the darkest place to hide
Blood soaks the walls
And shadows walk the halls
It’s a place of despair
to this my friend there's no repair

Your heart is dark
Your heart is cold
And it feels like I have nothing to hold
Keep this in, keep it tight
Be prepared, for this final fight

It’s just like freezing rain
That catches you when you least expect it
Pretty typical of someone who
Just blames everyone else
Weeping from the thoughts
That I could love someone else
Just doesn’t seem fair now
It just doesn’t seem fair

So how do you hold
Something you can’t even feel
I’ll tell you how
And you can tell me this fear

Your heart is dark
Your heart is cold
And it feels like I have nothing to hold
Keep this in, keep it tight
Be prepared, for this final fight

This is my final place of rest
My whole life was just a test
I think I needed this now
I think I needed you now
I insisted on a better way out
And you stay here, while I fall down
Our knees bend before we break
And we all have the reasoning

Keep me in mind
Just keep me in mind

Your heart is dark
Your heart is cold
And it feels like I have nothing to hold
Keep this in, keep it tight
Be prepared, for this final fight

Be prepared, because we have nothing
Be prepared, for this final fight

I'm becoming a fan of yours haha
These lyrics are really good and I love the darkness in them too. It's quite a long set of lyrics, but I can definately imagine them working well in a song.
There's one line where I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say. "And this my friend is no repair". It's not that I don't like it, it's just that I'm not sure what you mean by it.
But I think they are great lyrics. Keep up the good work!

EMO SONG!!! (That's not a bad thing, by the way.)

This could be a smash hit if the music was right.

Hah yes I would catagorize this as "emo" too... But the part where it says "This my friend is no repair" just simply means there is no repairing what is broken.

This my friend, is no repair... You're saying that this cannot be repaired. I'm not even sure if that would be right if you were to take it to an English teacher but hey, not all music is? hahah I don't know, just sorta came to thought.

... And this my friend is no repair

I would like to suggest "to this my friend there's no repair". Might fix it.

Cheers,
Bernd

Hrm yeup I think that sounds a lot better.

Thank you texter-bernd

wow. I just realized it said "heard" instead of "heart" haha. Just fixed that problem :X woooppssssss