Pollen

hey this is heavily influenced by cobain and nirvana
crit harshely but contructively

"pollen"
by:zach argo

cupids arrow killed a butterfly
my plane has hit the ocean
my wings must have been hiding
and a sinker sunk its captain
never taught me how to read
so lets play pictionary

with mansized blocks of lead
ill fly with them instead

like a pollen, still freefalling
i cant migrate on my own
peter helped me when the west was one
he held up his big silver gun and shot it
into his head

so pretend your happy

[chorus]
and your mom is happy
well her dad is happy
your newborn child is happy
and the pollens happy
and your always happy
and your pills are happy
maybe it will never find me
becouse im so damn happy
now
[chorus]

apples jump off to the ground
pot could never caused a frown
jesus never will comedown
looking at his masterpiece of eight

lets play some fun, fun games
handcuff party all around
turn your t.v to channel 3
thats your dreams falling down
and falling on me


[chorus]
and it makes you happy
and it makes her happy
makes the flowers happy
makes the welfare happy
makes her children happy
makes the BC happy
till the kid comes happy
[chorus]

like a pollen, still freefalling
i cant migrate on my own
peter helped me when the west was one
he held up his big silver gun and shot it

into his head
so pretend that your happy

[chorus]
steal, and your happy
choke, till your happy
pop pills, till your happy
smokes, till your happy
spring makes you happy
pollen makes you happy
politely makes you happy
her nighty makes you happy
Now
[chorus]

the center of the universe
was destroyed along with culture
and the idea of unisex was lost with a rash
and the ideas were carved in scuplture
becouse you where too damn happy
and youll always happy
and ill see you happy
when, i care (hold out care)

That's pretty sweet. I like it.

this is good...
Kurt Cobain is my favorite lyricist so i see where your coming from.

these lyrics are really really good. 8 out of 10.