Confused

Heyho,
please correct my english if something isn't right
I cane use my "school-english" only so please don't be angry

It's a little "love song". I wrote it yesterday.
Please leave comments here.

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I never knew what to say
Now I don't know what to do
It seems linke it would be good this way
But all I can think of is you

I can clearly feel the pain
Want to tell all my feelings to you
But all this i would do in vain
'Cause I'm not too good for you

Bridge
Love Hurts
I should stop loving you
But my heart says
This would be the wrong thing to do

[u]Chorus[/b]
I'm in love, I'm so confused
My head was all I ever used
Until Now ~~
Now my heart tells me what to do- and it says
I should never stop loving you

Whenever I talk to you I feel the fear
Of telling you the truth and want to disappear
Because I think you could love me not
The only right thing to trust is god ? NO!

It's not god who makes me feel this way
It's not jesus who tells me what to say
I could run away and return never
But then my Heart would Burn forever

BRIDGE

CHORUS

It feels like a bullet deep in me
I fell the pain but I can't see
It's only a feeling but it hurts bad
Once there was a man who said

BRIDGE

Oh, there would be no better thing to do
Than to hold on and never stop loving you

REFRAIN

O realy should go on , loving you

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Yes yes , it's not so good -_-'

where are you from, dude?

germany, but is my english sooo bad ?

sorry man, i can't tell you something really helpful, cuz english is not ma native language. You would better ask a native speaker)

do u play in a band?

no

well im not a native speaker but i am pretty good.. your english is not that bad and still i have a few things to say:

1. you wrote:
"Whenever I talk to you I feel the fear
Of to tell you the truth and want to disappear"
i think that:
'whenever i talk to you i feel the fear
of telling you the truth and disappear'
sounds more right..

2. you wrote "Because I think you could love me not
The only right thing it to trust in god ? NO!"
technically you cant write "because i think you could love me not" you should write "because i think you cannot love me" but i think that you can use what you wrote like a writing style of your own.
and about the second sentence, the right way to write is "the only right thing to trust is god? NO!"

3. you wrote: "I could run away and return never"
you should switch between return and never:
"i could run away and never return"

that's it...

and i think the song is beautiful.. and all i wrote is just a few grammar things and not about the song itself..

"Because I think you could love me not"

It's like in P.Roach's song "She loves me not"