Aphrodite's Curse (comment please)

Book Of Burden Part II:Aphrodite's Curse

Engaging beauty captures these lonely eyes
Evoking feelings never felt before
As she speaks I'm left wanting more
But I'm frozen from the spell she casted upon me

As I sail about the sea
She consumes my every thought
Have I been cursed
Aphrodite what have you done to me


As I reach my homeland
Her voice resonates through the wind
As night descends upon the world
Sleep is calling me
My dreams are filled by her

As I sail about the sea
She consumes my every thought
Have I been cursed
Aphrodite what have you done to me

Until we meet again
I'll be spellbound
Aphrodite's curse just for me

Sailing day and night
Searching for the one that haunts me
Aphrodite
What have you done to me

good

thanks, trying these days to write more folk metal lyrics