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Hello, My Finnish isn't good enough for this so please can someone translate the following two English songs into Finnish for me please? Please can you use as much slang in the first song as possible? And the second one very very formal. Thanks <u>very</u> much

Here comes the evil man
Pray for their lives you'll end
Smashing the gaudy throne
He throws it on[to] their bones

Like I'm losing with my wings in orbit
Try my best to make the moment awesome
If you remember not to tread with caution
I'll make your body speak in full distortion

I can't sleep at night, I fear death's warning
I keep afloat by holding tide so cautious
Somebody dragged me here, I'm trapped with wild horses
And now I'm losing and my heart is nauseous

Don't dance, don't dance, don't dance, don't dance
You can't win

Where there's freedom
There's freedom
Is this freedom?

Papa's left, papa's left
Papa's gone away from here
What is left in it's place?
Only our aching feet
You can see, you can see
Is there an exit here?
I believe, I believe
We're gonna leave this fear

Don't dance, don't dance, don't dance, don't dance
You can't dance

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Another child is born
Another race is won
Another dream is shattered
Another day has begun

This world is still afloat
No not in Noah's boat
We've only lost the vision
Of the stars we're meant to be

Another broken heart
Another lesson learnt
Another harvest eaten
Another night is gone
A new day's begun
Even your dreams they can be real

This world is full of love
We still have hope

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Thanks very much again

I'll take a shot at the second, the formal, one.

Taas uusi lapsi syntyy
Taas uusi kilpa voitetaan
Taas uusi haave murskataan
Taas uusi päivä alkaa

Maailma pysyy vielä pinnalla
Ei, ei Nooan laivassa
Emme vain enää näe
tähtiä, joita meistä piti tulla

Taas uusi sydän särkyy
Taas uusi oppitunti (meh, bad translation, can't think of a better one to fit the pattern)
Taas uusi sato syötynä
Taas uusi yö takana
Uusi aamu alkanut
Haaveesikin voivat olla totta

Tämä maailma täynnä rakkautta
Meillä vielä toivoa

Not great poetry, my translation

And just a quick warning: "as much slang as possible" is a dangerous term, especially in Finnish. Applying excessive Finnish slang to poetry is like applying lawn mower blades to kittens. It can be done, but it's not pretty.

Can I ask why you need these in Finnish? I think most people here want to understand a foreign song, but you seem fluent in English. Do you plan to make Finnish cover versions? If so, do you want the translated lyrics to match the original rhythm?

Thanks for your translation of the second song.
Well, I've been learning Finnish for several months now, and I think I'm doing quite well, but I was hoping to share these two songs with a Finnish friend, so a really literal translation of both would suffice... I wouldn't dare be so cheeky as to ask for the translator to make the syllables fit the music!

As for Finnish slang, I would have really liked to see it in "slangi", but as you said, it usually isn't pretty. The English song has a colloquial feel to it, so I thought if it was translated with "oo" instead of "On" or to that effect, then it would feel a bit more natural and a lot less dry.

Thank-you for your translation again

I'm still hoping someone can translate the first one for me. Thanks