please review my song

please review my song and honest i need to know if its ok oh yer it been copie righted just incase so not sealing my good rhym lol thanks C.I.D

every body listen...
u are now....
you are now rhyming with C.I.D


they say don't judge a book by it's cover
so, when you see me walking down the street
wearin my gucci and prada
lookin a touch smarter
dont mistake me for rich white kid
cause;

I'm a C.I.D
a criminal in disguise
u carnt catch me (ha ha ) i'm still free
i'm like robber undercover
a wolf in sheeps clothin
a mugger with out hood
doin the same crimes
but not the time
obviously
i do it better than you do cause
i look better than you do!

i could rob you while you sat next to me
you wouldn't even suspect me
remove all your designer carment silently
you wouldn't even think it was me
in fact you'd even smile and wave
at me the very next day
look at that rich white fool
couldn't have been him
well you been fooled
ops
did i just admit to doing the crime
oh well i ant goin to do no time cause


I'm a C.I.D
a criminal in disguise
u carnt catch me (ha ha ) i'm still free
i'm like robber undercover
a wolf in sheeps clothin
a mugger with out hood
doin the same crimes
but not the time
obviously
i do it better than you do cause
i look better than you do!


when am leaving the scene
the police spot me
but dont stop me
they stop you cause it
couldn't have been me
do i look like a criminal to you ?
well guess what!
c.i.d fooled you again


I'm a C.I.D
a criminal in disguise
u carnt catch me (ha ha ) i'm still free
i'm like robber undercover
a wolf in sheeps clothin
a mugger with out hood
doin the same crimes
but not the time
obviously
i do it better than you do cause
i look better than you do!


when i go to the club sellin some drugs
i might have to que like you
but when we get to the door
who you the think the bouncers
going to be friskin
me or you ?
the moral of the story is
you should all be like me C.I.D

a criminal in disguise
u carnt catch me (ha ha )

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please feel free to leave any commnets or changes you think should be made
there are more rhymes in the pipe line thanks C.I.D

i put music to it and it didnt work so i changed it tell me what you think

(cough cough) ahum

would every please rises for the honorable judge west
(honrorable yer right ) (laught)

docket number 613 the case of C.I.D

mr cid you have choses to act as ur own attorney
will the prosecution please proceed
i like to read out a statment the accused gave

am C.I.D a criminal in disguise
a robber under cover
am like batman and robin the reversed version
i think i got am bad case of mpd like me myslef and irene

i can be anything i wanna be
a butcher
a baker
a candle stick maker
not even my own mother ad recognise me
i could even be the person sitting next to you
in fact everyone stop an take look to the left of you
oh my god it him its cid
are you sure look again
hay were did he go am sure it was him

am C.I.D a criminal in disguise
a robber undercover
am like batman and robin the reversed version
i think i got a bad case of mpd like me myself irene

if you see someone going through your rubbish bin
dont worrie stealin your identity
tonite micheal am going to be mr white
and oh look hes the manager of new hsbc
i even got his old photo id

am C.I.D a criminal in disguise
a robber undercover
am like batman and robin the reversed version
i think i got a bad case of mpd like me myself and irene

and would have got crime everybody through it was him
until they discover the finger prints i left on the till
but i dont bother me that they caught me
ill just plead insanity
spend 6 month in the funny farm and then be free (laughing )

(bang bang bang)(judges hammer)

can i have some order in the court please

so mr C.I.D how do you plead

insanity

6 month in the funny farm (bang ) (judges hammer)

balif take him away

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