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  1. #1
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    Default some body please review my song you look but dont review

    can people please review thanks

    let me pop your cherry (girl)


    (laughing)
    its C.I.D
    with another number one again girl

    ll...
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    i'll turn your from zero to hero
    give you the info to become a ninfo
    turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
    teach you how to hold ya breath
    if you know what i mean (laugh)


    ll...
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry

    girl were i come from we dont like spitting
    so i'll have to teach you how to swollow
    do things even your mother wouldnt do
    my favirote page of the kumasatra
    turn you ito a flexible profressional
    number 1 contortionist on the scene

    ll...
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    i'll turn your from zero to hero
    give you the info to become a ninfo
    turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
    teach you how to hold ya breath
    if you know what i mean (laugh)

    ll...
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry

    l'll teach you how to go low
    wave your hand like a pro
    ride that pole like a rodio
    take them clothes of with ya teeth
    to play with 3 or 4 or evem more
    use them wipes and chains
    maybe even a bit of BDSM
    tie em to the bed

    ll...
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    let me pop your cherry girl
    let me pop ya cherry
    i'll turn your from zero to hero
    give you the info to become a ninfo
    turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
    teach you how to hold ya breath
    if you know what i mean (laugh)



    copy right @2009 criminal in disguise(c.i.d) production

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    i like it ,,,,its poppin maybe we could throw in a collaboration or somethin..........hey you should do me a huge fava an check out sum of my freestyles i would really appreciate if you did........but yea i was feelin where you were goin with it maybe some more lines in it but its not bad

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