Review my song pleasee!!!!

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    Afet said:

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    not soooooooooooooo bad,thanks
    ı am curious about where are you from,could ı know?
    Cuando mueran los astros y queden sólo restos de polvillo cósmico,
    iremos de paseo por esas soledades para enseñarte miamor, lo que es la eternidad. ♡
     
  2. volleyball15 said:

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    i unnnno
    i dont really know u... srry
     
  3. AustinAskew said:

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    nice job
    i think those lyrics would fit perfectly in an avril-type song, and thats the key, fitting the right words with the type of sound you want to express
     
  4. volleyball15 said:

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    awwhh thank you
    and i love avrils old stuff
    its amazingg!
     
  5. Teddy123abc said:

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    ill give you a A+ rofl good

    (sorry ide wright a lot more but im trying to come up with a song offf the top of my head)
     
  6. volleyball15 said:

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    hahhahaa thats okay
    and ive gotten so many good comments, and i didnt expect people to like it...
     
  7. Brian43281 said:

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    Hey, I really really liked it. Good job start singing now!
     
  8. volleyball15 said:

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    nooo waaayy!
    i have like the worst voice ever !!
     
  9. tsortore said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by mikeymcee View Post
    What happened to optimism in songs?
    THANK YOU!
     
  10. volleyball15 said:

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    ?????