Mi Universo

Does anyone have an English translation of Mi Universo by Jesus Adrian Romero??

Mi Universo
My Universe

Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte solo un rato de mi tiempo
no quiero separate un día solamente
Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte mis palabras como gotas
quiero un diluvio de alabanzas en mi boca

You're my world
I do not want to give you just a bit of my time
I do not want to separate one day only
You're my world
I do not want to give you my word as droplets
I want a flood of praise in my mouth

Que seas mi universo
Que seas todo lo que siento y lo que pienso
Que seas el primer aliento en la mañana
y la luz en mi ventana

You're my world
You're all that I feel and what I think
You're the first breath in the morning
and light in my window

Que seas mi universo
Que llenes cada uno de mis pensamientos
Que tu presencia y tu poder sean mi alimento
oh Jesús es mi deseo

You're my world
To fill each of my thoughts
Your presence and your power will be my food
oh Jesus is my desire

Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte solo parte de mis años
te quiero dueño de mi tiempo y de mi espacio

You're my world
I do not want to give you only part of my years
I want you (as the) owner of my time and my space

Que seas mi universo
no quiero hacer mi voluntad quiero agradarte
y cada sueño que hay en mi quiero entregarte

You're my world
I do not want to made my will I want to like/please you
and every dream there is inside of me I want to give you

//Que seas mi universo
Que seas todo lo que siento y lo que pienso
Que seas el primer aliento en la mañana
y la luz de mi ventana
Que seas mi universo
Que llenes cada uno de mis pensamientos
Que tu presencia y tu poder sean mi alimento
Oh Jesús es mi deseo...//

// You're my world
You're all that I feel and what I think
You're the first breath in the morning
and the light from my window
You're my world
To fill each of my thoughts
Your presence and your power will be my food
Oh Jesus is my desire ...//

////Que seas mi universo////
You're my world

That translation is wrong on one crucial part of the song.

"Que seas" is not a definitive "YOU ARE..." It has the connotation of "I have the desire that..."

And "universo" is not "world," it's "universe." So, here is the real translation after fixing some crucial parts of this song that change the mood altogether:

Mi Universo
My Universe

Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte solo un rato de mi tiempo
no quiero separate un día solamente
Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte mis palabras como gotas
quiero un diluvio de alabanzas en mi boca

That you'd be my universe
I do not want to give you just a bit of my time
I do not want to separate one day only
That you'd be my universe
I do not want to give you my word as droplets
I want a flood of praise in my mouth

Que seas mi universo
Que seas todo lo que siento y lo que pienso
Que seas el primer aliento en la mañana
y la luz en mi ventana

That you'd be my universe
That you'd be all that I feel and what I think
That you'd be the first breath in the morning
and light in my window

Que seas mi universo
Que llenes cada uno de mis pensamientos
Que tu presencia y tu poder sean mi alimento
oh Jesús es mi deseo

That you'd be my universe
To fill each of my thoughts
Your presence and your power will be my food
oh Jesus it is my desire... (Notice the transition here)

Que seas mi universo
no quiero darte solo parte de mis años
te quiero dueño de mi tiempo y de mi espacio

That you'd be my universe
I do not want to give you only part of my years
I want you (as the) owner of my time and my space

Que seas mi universo
no quiero hacer mi voluntad quiero agradarte
y cada sueño que hay en mi quiero entregarte

That you'd be my universe
I do not want to do my own will I want to please you
and every dream there is inside of me I want to give you

//Que seas mi universo
Que seas todo lo que siento y lo que pienso
Que seas el primer aliento en la mañana
y la luz de mi ventana
Que seas mi universo
Que llenes cada uno de mis pensamientos
Que tu presencia y tu poder sean mi alimento
Oh Jesús es mi deseo...//

Same as above

The reason why this is so important to point out is because the song loses its sincerity if we mistranslate it like above. Telling God that "You're all that I feel and what I think" is a blatant lie. But letting Him know that it is our DESIRE that He'd be "All that I desire and I think" (which is the connotation of the spanish version) is much more genuine and sincere.

Originally Posted by randomguy

That translation is wrong on one crucial part of the song.

"Que seas" is not a definitive "YOU ARE..." It has the connotation of "I have the desire that..."

And "universo" is not "world," it's "universe." So, here is the real translation after fixing some crucial parts of this song that change the mood altogether:

..............

The reason why this is so important to point out is because the song loses its sincerity if we mistranslate it like above. Telling God that "You're all that I feel and what I think" is a blatant lie. But letting Him know that it is our DESIRE that He'd be "All that I desire and I think" (which is the connotation of the spanish version) is much more genuine and sincere.

ohh gosh, you are right, I dont know why I translated like that...

thanxs for your help