"Can't find a way"- maybe one of my best songs that I composed... Please comment!

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    karlsanada10 said:

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    It's been a long time since I posted my last song here.... So here's another one:

    'Can’t find a way”

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    I’m always starring at you…
    I’m always in your side…
    I’m always here to save you…
    I’m always here if you need someone…
    OH!
    II
    But you hate, you hate me...
    That’s why I can’t do it…
    But I’m trying, I’m trying…
    To do it!


    Refrain:
    But why?
    Can you tell me why… you hate me so much?
    It’s hard to figure out!
    So please tell me why!?!?

    Chorus:
    I can’t find a way to figure it out!
    I can’t find a way to hate you too!
    I can’t find a way not to love you!
    I can’t find a way to stop starring at you!
    I can’t find a way not to miss you!
    I just can’t find a way!


    III:
    Every time I locked my room…
    I’m always cryin’ and tryin’ to figure it out…
    But it’s really hard to identify…
    I’m usually playing my guitar…
    But now it’s rot in the corner of my room…
    OH YEAH!
    (Repeat chorus)

    Outtro/ending:
    It’s very frustrating not to know why you are mad to me…
    Why you hate me that much…
    It’s very tempting to ask…
    But I can’t…
    Because you’re avoiding me…
    (repeat chorus 2x)

    Oh… ohohoho… yeah, heyeah!


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    Hope you like it!
     
  2. tsortore said:

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    You probably have an awsome sound for it in your head, and I like it but its a little repetitive.
     
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    ^If I were just a good guitarist, I would make a chords...

    Well, All my songs are kinda Emoish... Try searching them if you want... Thanks for the commens BTW.
     
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    Revive.haha. I'm back!
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    I used to relate to this so much....and after all this time I still cried
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    I was lonely when I composed that.