Ветер ~ Correct my translation, please?

I'm still a beginner with Russian, but I can't resist trying to translate Russian songs, because there are so many that I love. So could someone correct my English translation please?

Ветер ~Монокини и Юлия Савичева

Таешь на ладонях
Незаметно не догонят
Ты же знаешь, знаешь
Пульсы - сто ударов
Ты почувствуй без пожара
Не устала, не устала

You're melting on (my) palms
It doesn't seem as though they'll catch (us)
You know, you know
(Our) pulses - 100 strokes (like, beats per minute?)
You feel without fire
I wasn't tired, I wasn't tired

Называй меня ветер
Называй меня сердце
Называй меня воздух...

The wind calls me
My heart calls me
The air calls me...

В точку превращаюсь
Незаметно исчезаю
И летаю, и летаю
Тайна где-то рядом
Заблестели наши взгляды
Я хотела и летела

At that point, I change
It doesn't seem as though (it) will disappear
I fly, I fly
Near somewhere secret
Our gazes glowed
I wanted (you) and I flew

Называй меня ветер
Называй меня сердце
Называй меня воздух...

The wind calls me
My heart calls me
The air calls me...

Dreams~, you did great job

Таешь на ладонях
Незаметно не догонят
Ты же знаешь, знаешь
Пульсы - сто ударов
Ты почувствуй без пожара
Не устала, не устала

You're melting on (my) palms
they won't catch us so that we won't notice
You know, you know
(Our) pulses - 100 strokes (like, beats per minute?)
You feel without fire
I am not tired, I am not tired

Называй меня ветер
Называй меня сердце
Называй меня воздух...

call me wind
call me heart
call me air

В точку превращаюсь
Незаметно исчезаю
И летаю, и летаю
Тайна где-то рядом
Заблестели наши взгляды
Я хотела и летела

I am changing into a dot
I dissapear unnoticed
I fly, I fly
The secret is somewhere near
Our gazes glowed
I wanted (you) and I flew

Называй меня ветер
Называй меня сердце
Называй меня воздух...

call me wind
call me heart
call me air

The bold parts are corrections.

Спасибо! Those lines make a lot more sense. I still need to improve my understanding of word order, I think.

I have one question: why is "не устала" translated into the present tense ("I'm not tired")? Is it a common phrase?

I guess because word устала means tired, in any tense. Correct me if I'm wrong

Originally Posted by Dangerous & Moving

I guess because word устала means tired, in any tense. Correct me if I'm wrong

Yes, you can use this word in past and present tenses.

Originally Posted by Dreams~

Спасибо! Those lines make a lot more sense. I still need to improve my understanding of word order, I think.

I have one question: why is "не устала" translated into the present tense ("I'm not tired")? Is it a common phrase?

For it to be "I wasn't tired" the sentence would have been "Я не была усталой(усталая*)".

*not sure which one is right, both sound correct to me.

Originally Posted by TheNuttyOne

For it to be "I wasn't tired" the sentence would have been "Я не была усталой(усталая*)".

Ah, okay - you'd use была. Я понимаю, спасибо!

Originally Posted by TheNuttyOne

For it to be "I wasn't tired" the sentence would have been "Я не была усталой(усталая*)".

*not sure which one is right, both sound correct to me.

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