Expectations. My first proper poem.

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  1. OrdinaryGirl. said:

    Default Expectations. My first proper poem.

    Why do you continuously push me,
    Hoping for a reason to justify your actions.
    My hearts too delicate, too tame,
    Did you expect a different reaction.

    Nothing but a girl longing for a boy,
    To treat her like a rose.
    The heart's a fool the mind not connected,
    My eyes say too much, I will them to close.

    So the girl who wants to be a flower,
    Wants a boy to be her sun.
    His arms are the rays enveloping her,
    Her heart, and her mine finally as one.

  2. OrdinaryGirl. said:

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    Hey.

    Thankyou so much
    It was how I was feeling that day.
    And I've got an odd addiction to Twilight fanfics.
    And I read one, and I just got so lost in wanting someone to be exactly what Edward is to Bella.


    Thanks again
    x
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    ELEEF said:

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    Hey !
    So deep and beautiful , really!

    So the girl who wants to be a flower,
    Wants a boy to be her sun.
    His arms are the rays enveloping her,
    Her heart, and her mine finally as one.


    This part was my favourite , especially the way you described his arms!
    Really amazing ^^'
    And I understand your addiction to Twilight , Cause I'm just too addicted to it & lost hoping to find someone like Edward Ughh .. lucky bella
    .. وذاك الذي لا يرى غيره
    ولا يجد الخير خيـرا ً اذا لم يكن خيره
    فــــــــراغ .. فـــــراغ