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    Default correct my mistakes please

    can sombody help me correct my mistakes please? it's for school:
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    thxx Dankuuu, Merciiii
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    Hihi GecePerisi

    Here are some suggestions on your text:

    Mein Name ist ....... (Name in German is a noun)
    Ich bin ... Jahre alt. (alt = adjective)
    Ich bin Belgierin.
    Ich wohne in ... .
    Meine Muttersprache sind Niederländisch und Türkisch. (sind, since you mention two things later, Niederländisch AND Türkisch)
    Ich kenne aber auch Deutsch, Französisch und Englisch. (instead of kennen you could use verstehen (to understand) here or sprechen (to speak))
    Ich bin ledig. Ich habe 2 Brüder. Ich bin Studentin. Ich gehe in die ... Klasse.
    Meine Hobbies sind Musik hören und singen.

    Changing the sentence structure you could begin with something other than "Ich ..." all the time, of course!
    होता है जो होना है ... वक़्त ही शायद खुदा है ...
    कौन कहता है आदमी अपनी किस्मत खुद लिखता है?

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    Hahahahah english le karistirdim TEsekkurler steena. Yeni basladim daha Almancayla

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    wobei des I bin 28 joa oid scho weanarisch is

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    english I am = german Ich bin

    so you can say zb. "Ich bin .... Jahre alt"

    "I" alone doesen't exist in the german language (only in dialect)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steena View Post
    Hihi GecePerisi

    Here are some suggestions on your text:

    Mein Name ist ....... (Name in German is a noun)
    Ich bin ... Jahre alt. (alt = adjective)
    Ich bin Belgierin.
    Ich wohne in ... .
    Meine Muttersprache sind Niederländisch und Türkisch. (sind, since you mention two things later, Niederländisch AND Türkisch)
    Ich kenne aber auch Deutsch, Französisch und Englisch. (instead of kennen you could use verstehen (to understand) here or sprechen (to speak))
    Ich bin ledig. Ich habe 2 Brüder. Ich bin Studentin. Ich gehe in die ... Klasse.
    Meine Hobbies sind Musik hören und singen.

    Changing the sentence structure you could begin with something other than "Ich ..." all the time, of course!
    CORRECTIONS THERE: meine Muttersprachen (singular :die Sprache)

    ich bin belgierin: ich komme aus Belgien/ ich wohne in Belgien

    ich bin ledig (nicht:edig)

    Du kannst auch anfangen mit "Guten morgen, /guten Tag, ich heisse......

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