SAD POEM: Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment

A song smeared with the rigid ache of a stagnancy,
blinded by the blissful damage in a euphoric oddity.
Buried in plethora of thoughts that writhe in savage innocence,
we calm ourselves to our mistakes in a rueful opulence.

Nights of enamored lies etched in our beating minds,
confused by the verity that slipped in the static times.
Words that have lost all traces of salvaged meaning,
you fervently instigate the abode of my ardent pleading.

With the final silence that sleeps within our hearts,
we bade a farewell oath to this love that slowly departs.
A plague that solidify the impeding of a treasured smile,
I stand in blistered forlorn and let the tears fall for a while.

After some time of wasted breaths in fatigue admiration,
we turned away from this unspoken desolation.
Bewail this sodomised sorrow and rage assembled,
to try, fail and pretend you don't feel their disappoint

It's too dressed up with large words. It's alright to have them here and there as an added sparkle. However, when they're all over the place it's like a woman with too much makeup.

I really loved this poem, seriously it's fantastic.

Originally Posted by LaylaFelix

It's too dressed up with large words. It's alright to have them here and there as an added sparkle. However, when they're all over the place it's like a woman with too much makeup.

I agree it's hard to understand
but after rereading it several times I do like it

seriouly hard words...!!

vithiancamelia. I am a hobby music composer, but not a lyric writer. I am entertaining the idea of possibly writing a song around/using these lyrics. Hit me an email and we can talk more. pm051565@yahoo.com